FOR THE MAN WHO HAS EVERYTHING
100 words for Friday Fictioneers
Photoprompt © J Hardy Carroll
Thirteen-year old Fauntleroy was allowed to skip day school and accompany his coiffured and perfumed Mama to purchase something for Papa’s fiftieth birthday. This could take time because Papa had everything. Their family was very rich.
The lad spotted something across the street, near Harrods. It was a metal contraption. Boot at one end. All alone.
Mama carefully explained the origins and purpose of a prosthetic limb.
“Great,” said Fauntleroy. “Let’s chop Papa’s leg off so he can have one of them things for his birthday!”
Mama urgently needed to speak to her son’s headmaster. Fauntleroy’s grammar was appalling.
I liked the whimsy
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I actually based it on the remark of a real child that I read somewhere. Strange logic and all Mama hears is the bad grammar!
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His grammar and his outlook need a bit of attention I’d say. As for the mother, she sounds like a lost cause
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I think he could be a psychopath!
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Little Lord living up to his name. I fear with his mother left to bring him up it may be too late for him to change!
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You’ve got him in one, Iain, what a little git!
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Life seen through the eyes of a child.. and Mum needs to focus on more than his bad grammar!
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Yes, she does seem to have taken her eye off the ball a bit. Thanks for commenting, Dale. Hope you’re surviving your heatwave. It’s a little cooler in the UK today but still balmy!
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It is hell on earth, to tell the truth…
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I have a friend who came to the UK from Spain because (mostly) it is cooler here and therefore much more bearable for people who have to do a day’s work in the height of summer.
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I can totally understand. We are in the midst of a heat wave. They don’t usually last more than two weeks… we shall see, won’t we?
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Adams Family values. Ahhh
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Absolutely. Sweet little chap, isn’t he 😉
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That kid is one deeply disturbed little toon.
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I know. And he’s based on a real one …
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bah! the grammar – the grammar
(nice humor)
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Well, Mama sees it as a priority, no doubt about that, the mad lady she is.
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haha 🙂
very good….
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or would that be very well?
wink
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Scary and humorous both
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Thank you for stopping by, Piyali, I appreciate your comments very much, best wishes, Jilly.
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I fear there is something more than bad grammar at play here. Lovely writing.
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Oh Neel, thanks so much.
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Haha, funny on so many levels! And I think Fauntleroy needs to visit a child psychiatrist 🙂
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Yes, he should do that asap, while Mama is at the therapist’s.
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I’m with Mama. I hate it when them people use incorrect grammar.
Click to read my FriFic tale
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Keith, thanks for making me laugh out loud!
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Great story – a very different take on the prompt! Are you by any chance thinking of a tale Winston Churchill related about why his father removed him from his prep school?
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I wasn’t but I’m going to look that one up. I went to school in South Harrow so we heard some stuff about Churchill to the extent I did know he was a “different” type of boy. But my inspiration came from Lauren Bacall’s biography “By Myself” where she mentions that after Humphrey Bogart passed away her little boy calmly suggested the family shoot themselves so they could be with Daddy by Christmas. Terrifyingly sad and it stuck with me. I think it’s easy to underestimate what goes in in children’s minds and, being me, I have to turn to humour to straighten it out in my mind. (Maybe Fauntleroy was genuinely trying to help Mama 😉 ) Thanks so much for commenting, Penny.
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Mama needs to get her priorities straight!
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Yes, Liz, she has responsibilities on her hands with little Fauntleroy.
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Talk about priorities… there is a point when grammar should be second priority 🙂
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I will make a note to tell Mama – very tactfully, of course.
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What a mixed up family. I think Mama needs more help than the boy.
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They could both do with a bit of counselling, I think.
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Oh dear!
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I couldn’t have put it better myself!
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So, after correcting the boy’s grammar did they chop off Father’s leg?
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That was the plan but then Fauntleroy suggested using the fish knife when everyone knows it should be the steak knife so everything went off at a bit of a tangent 🙂
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Where did that boy learn his table manners? The same place he learned grammar?
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Lol. I blame the parents.
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I’d speak to a therapist before I’d speak to the headmaster. Very funny.
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Thank you, Sandra and I quite agree – two therapists, one for Mama and one for Fauntleroy, the wee git.
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Dear Jilly,
I apologize for being so slow getting around this week. We’ve had out of town guests since last week, a family reunion, a surprise birthday party, a memorial service and a military retirement party (tomorrow night).
I’d say Fauntleroy needs more than a grammar lesson. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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You have been busy, Rochelle, and what a mixture of events. Thank you for taking the time to comment on Fauntleroy, dear little boy (not). Much appreciated, Jilly 🙂
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That was hilarious 😂! The boy will become a great marketer, creating need when there isn’t one for a product.
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Thank you very much for your great comments!
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Nice one, he could just buy the leg as a stand by. Well until he sorts out his grammar.
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Very funny play on words, James, you made me laugh!
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Wow Jilly – quite a Gothic tale- unusual take on the prompt ! Sinister and funny at the same time. Interesting.
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My characters often behave very badly. I can’t seem to control them 😉 Thank you for stopping by, I appreciate it very much.
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I was this child (I’m still this adult) who would say these things, although my mom never commented on my grammar. Very nice take on the prompt
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Oh, what great and honest comments. Thank you so much, Kelley.
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mom was under stress. i think the kid was just trying to be funny to help her cope with the situation.
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Plaridel, that is such a nice comment, showing compassion – I regret my characters often fail to show that excellent quality. You’re right, kids do step in with suggestions in their eagerness to help and to them it all seem perfectly logical. Best wishes, Jilly.
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Sure his grammar is appalling 😉
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Unfortunately you are absolutely right. Mama needs to get on to the case … Thank you for your comments, Dahlia, much appreciated.
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Delightfully witty!
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Magarisa, thank you so much 🙂
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Ah, the imaginations of a child but I don’t think his grammar is the most significant thing his mum should worry about. A very creative tale! =)
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You are right, Brenda, there are other pressing issues to be dealt with regarding our young Fauntleroy! Thanks so much for your comments, much appreciated.
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Bahahaha grammar!! What out for him around the family knives!
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Yes, Laurie, he needs a bit of close supervision, I think. Thanks so much for your comments!
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So funny. I think Mama might need to take both herself and Fanutleroy off to a psychiatrist too. Or am I the odd one for thinking Papa’s present a bit extreme?
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Sarah Ann, you are in good company – Papa’s present is – just – a bit extreme. Lol. Thank you for stopping by and for your comments.
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Haha, brilliant! A kid with a name like Fauntleroy is bound to turn out a bit weird…
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I know – who would inflict such a name on a boy? Oh, I did! Thanks so much for commenting, Ellie.
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Fun read. I would be more concerned with his suggestion than with his bad grammar.
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Brilliant, sometimes the grammar back in those days was the be all and end all. My mum is still a bit similar!
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Thank you so much for your comments. Yes, clearly grammar is still top priority with many mothers 🙂
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