Friday Fictioneers 28th January 2022
Thank you to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for hosting the Friday Fictioneers Challenge every week
This week thanks also to Rochelle who has shared with us this great photograph
First came a sound like a gunshot, then the restaurant’s exquisitely-decorated ceiling cracked and the entire place filled with smoke and shadows and screams. I trembled more than usual, unable to make out who was now beside me. I yelled “Don’t bother with me, I’m an old man” but no sound came.
I realised one of the shadows was supporting my frail body. “Remember what you used to tell me,” it said. “How you were brave because Grandma loved you. How Grandma protected you when the bombs kept dropping.”
I’d survived once again. This time my saviour was my daughter.
Oh, what a beautiful story, Jilly. Especially à propos for today’s date in a weird way
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Thank you, Dale. The date was in my mind then the story sort of evolved. I missed last week so glad to be back with a post.
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🙂
I’ve yet to (if I do) write one this week…
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Absoluely lovely, Jilly. Mirrored situations are always a good thing in my book
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Thank you very much, Neil. I agree that mirrored situations can be satisfying.
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A shame that thos kind of history keeps repeating. Nicely done.
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Thank you very much, Iain.
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A wonderful story on so many levels. Selflessness, love snd support can be found everywhere, and sadly, terror, too.
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Thank you for your lovely thoughtful comment.
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Phew, I thought he had been forgotten about for a minute.
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No, he’s rescued, safe and sound! Thank you for commenting 🙂
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A lovely story, beautifully written.
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Keith, thank you for your lovely response.
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yes, I like it!
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So pleased you like it, Oneta. Thank you.
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Nicely contrived from the prompt. Well done, Jilly.
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Thank you, Bill, I appreciate your comment very much.
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You’re welcome.
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just loved this story. well done.
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That’s brilliant, I’m so pleased. Thank you.
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Now that’s a proper story with a real beginning, middle and end! And how nice that it was his daughter who saved him.
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Thank you, Penny, your lovely comments are great to receive and really appreciated.
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What a horrific scene. Even beauty can shine through horror.
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Thank you, Tannille – I’m glad their love shone.
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I really like the generational connection here. Good one, Jilly.
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Thank you so much for your lovely comments.
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From grandmother to daughter, the caring continues through the generations.
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Yes, beautifully put, Liz. Thank you for your lovely comment.
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Your words created a great visual as I read your story, Jilly.
I enjoyed that part very much. I’m pleased he was saved again.
Have a wonderful weekend … Stay Safe
Isadora 😎
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Thank you very much for your great comments, Isadora, and stay safe you too 🙂
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Dear Jilly,
What a lovely story this is. From generation to generation. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you so much, Rochelle, so glad you liked my story.
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The love and care for this man has passed down the generations. This time he survived because of his granddaughter. Profound story, Jilly.
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Thank you so much.
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It’s nice to have someone to lean on in the worst situations. He’s been through two of the worst situations.
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He has indeed – thank you very much for your thoughtful comment.
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Beautiful, touching piece. Love the generational nature of love in this story.
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Thank you for your thoughtful and generous response, Lisa.
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Tears blurring my eyes. Beautiful story, Jilly.
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What a lovely response – thank you so much!
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You’re very welcome.
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Oh this is beautiful! The sounds and terror come through clearly. So glad his granddaughter was there!
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Thank you for your kind and generous comments, Laurie.
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